My first attempt had to be improved as there was way too much blank spaces and the magazine looked unfinished. So, for my final design I will try and fill the empty space at the top near the masthead. Also, I dislike the cut off bit of the image where Sam’s guitar had been cropped and it looked unprofessional. However I am happy with the main image and its positioning and the rule of left third looks effective as the cover stories can be seen easily. I asked a number of my friends for feedback for the magazine and they said they liked the layout of the titles and the main images looked very relevant to music but it looked a little plain and needed maybe one more image.
My final version of the music magazine, included all the changes I wanted to make from my first draft. The inclusion of free posters fill in the gap at the top of the magazine and also are used to attract readers into buying it. I also used another flash to cover the cut off image and stretched the magazine to make them look more dominant. I took my friends advice and added more images that I had taken at concerts myself so they are still primary images.
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